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Here's my latest offering. I wanted it to be more dramatic, but it's turned out rather twee . . .

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Wonderful marbretherese!! I am working on a piece myself and I must be on the 10th revision.


I love the softness and use of color. :D
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thanks Riv! I must admit I don't revise mine (you can probably tell) - I'd never be able to remember what I did in the first place :lol: I look forward to seeing yours when you're happy with it - we need as many people as possible to post their work here!
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Charming picture, marbretherese! And watercolor is an appropriate medium for the flooding of Isengard!

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Thanks, Merry! It's not one of my favourites, to be honest. I'm pleased that it does at least look the way I first imagined Merry & Pippin (Merry bears a striking resemlance to the brother of a schoolfriend) - and I created it using only three colours, which was fun as well as a challenge - but the background is a fairly obvious afterthought and it's all way too cutesy! Back to the drawing board for the next one (quite literally) !!
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I like it, Mabreterese! For three colours you've done a pretty good job of mixing a lot of subtle shades, and it makes it very harmonious and just like the description in the book where they blend into the rubble :lol: . I don't think the background looks as much of an afterthought as you think it does! And I think the barrel, pipe and bowl are particularly good as a little still life in the corner. Nice modelling and shading there. Nice too to see Merry blowing his smoke-rings. Pretty difficult pose to capture!

It's great to see other peoples ideas of what characters look like - that's why I started the Tolkien artists threads - it fascinates me how these stories live individually in each and everyone's imagination. A sort of sub-creation of the sub-creation, if you know what I mean!
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thanks Iolanthe - I'm quite pleased with the barrel, pipe and bowl. It bothered me for ages how Merry could be blowing smoke rings with his hands behind his head - where would the pipe be? then I remembered the barrels of Longbottom Leaf . . . I captured the pose by sitting on the floor with my back against the wall and working it out from there. (it's incredibly uncomfortable, by the way :lol: ). My sketchbook has several early versions of the picture in which Merry looks more like a contortionist than a hobbit . . . :roll:

So . . . who's got something else to show us?
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marbretherese wrote:I captured the pose by sitting on the floor with my back against the wall and working it out from there. (it's incredibly uncomfortable, by the way :lol: ).
Ah, the mark of a true artist suffering for art :lol: .

I would have a picture nearly ready to show - I was going to paint this afternoon after much sketching a few weeks ago, but it has suffered a blow. That bloomin' Alan Lee has got there before me!

I had what I thought was brilliant :idea: idea of Gollum reflected in the Ring which I was sure no one had done before, then David Day's 'Tolkien's Ring' turned up on Friday (great book, by the way) and there was a sketch by Alan of the exact same thing :( .

Of course the angle of mine is different, Gollum is in a different pose and mine would be a painting. But I felt crushed all the same :roll: . So I didn't have the will to get on with it today. Ah well.
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Get back to Gollum and the Ring, Iolanthe, and let's have a look at it! There's bound to be an overlap of ideas at some point - we're all working off the same text! it's the interpretation that counts. Luckily there's enough Tolkien out there to keep us all going (professionals and amateurs alike) for years and years! :D
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:lol: You are right, or course. I suppose it was just painful to discover that Alan had already been there and done it a lot better!
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Iolanthe, I would love to see your take on Gollum and the ring! You style is very different from Alan Lee, so I would imagine the pictures would look very different. So please please show us your work! (:-o< :D

marbretherese, a little late, but I also wanted to let you know how much I loved your picture. I think it captured the (still relatively) care-free spirit of those two hobbits quite well! :D
Namarie,

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thanks for your kind comments, Airwin!!
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Airwin wrote:Iolanthe, I would love to see your take on Gollum and the ring! You style is very different from Alan Lee, so I would imagine the pictures would look very different. So please please show us your work! (:-o< :D
I'll have to do quite a bit on it first as it's just drawn ready for painting!
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Iolanthe wrote:I'll have to do quite a bit on it first as it's just drawn ready for painting!
Is there any interest in opening a thread for preliminary sketches? I am in that stage of a series on Tolkien poetry.

Let me know.
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Post by Iolanthe »

You could just post them here as 'work in progress' and then post the finished result with a big Taa Daa when it's ready :D .
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